Hi Ryan, I enjoyed the demo of your game a lot so far! There were a few typos in there but the game was really enjoyable overall! I especially enjoyed the message if you attempted to jump off from a great height.
If you need any help with proofreading or similar stuff as you continue developing the game, I'd be happy to help you out! I'm definitely looking forward to more progress in the game and story and playing future versions in any case.
I loved this demo! The graphics were exceptional and the controls were easy to grasp despite being a little different than what I'm used to. The story was really interesting and I liked how every character gave you snippits of the bigger plot at hand. Absolutely in love with this.
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This looks amazing! Keep it up :D
If you need someone to help you with proofreading or translations (EN/ ESLA) I'd love to help!
Hi Ryan, I enjoyed the demo of your game a lot so far! There were a few typos in there but the game was really enjoyable overall! I especially enjoyed the message if you attempted to jump off from a great height.
If you need any help with proofreading or similar stuff as you continue developing the game, I'd be happy to help you out! I'm definitely looking forward to more progress in the game and story and playing future versions in any case.
Thanks, I really need some help with proofreading since my writing skill is very limited :D
I loved this demo! The graphics were exceptional and the controls were easy to grasp despite being a little different than what I'm used to. The story was really interesting and I liked how every character gave you snippits of the bigger plot at hand. Absolutely in love with this.
Thanks, I'll do my best to keep updating this game.
This looks amazing! Do you have a Twitter one can follow you for updates and more lovely art?