Somehow, my player always keep running to the left when no controls is pressed, Might be a bug. The game is great, well made, specially the graphic. Very stylish and blend perfectly with the story and the mood. Great work!
A beautifully presented game! after 45 minutes I was engrossed. It just goes to prove that no violence is required to make a game captivating. I look forward to seeing more of this!
Ein Spiel in der die Menschen verschwunden sind und es nur noch Roboter gibt? Wie könnte ich das abschlagen. Hat mir viel Spaß gemacht und da die deutsche Sprache noch nicht unterstütz wird habe ich es übersetzt. Ich würde mich sehr freuen, wenn ihr euch mein Video anschaut.
I am not gonna lie when I saw this I thought of Call Of Duty: Black Ops 3 and Detroit: Become Human. This is supposed to be a compliment, both of those games are great.
this is a really impressive little demo!! the music and art are both incredible :) i did encounter some bugs though, especially with stairs- i just fell through them a few times, including one time in the ending area that trapped me beneath them, so i had to restart from my save point.
all things considered though this is a very strong start! i'm excited to see what happens next to my favourite tiny delivery robot :>
I really enjoyed this! The art is amazing and the characters were all likeable and fun. A few little English things (e.g. in the opening text) but I'm sure you can get the writing edited before the full release. I'm assuming this is because it's still in progress but I believe there's a continuity error at the end of the demo: The robot guard should not be an empty shell because it was established earlier that they had a functioning battery. We shouldn't be able to drop into their body (unless this is part of the story and the guard was the one who stole our original body?). Anyway I can't wait for the full game!
The game is really nice but I found some problems:first,I cant jump over that pink box to reach the other part of the area(I pushed it to its place but i still couldnt).Second,when you change screens It might happen that you cant move anymore.Third,the jump height is like you would be hit by an invisible wall,I just literally pushes you onto the ground as soon as you jump.The last problem is that its that the game Is laggy(but maybe just cuz my laptop is bad).But since its a demo i wont say it is bad,I see a lot of potential in it,but it really has some problems to deal with.Good luck.
This is the most amazing game I've played in a while, let alone the fact that it's a demo!
The art is absolutely gorgeous and I love the technique mentioned above. The colors were amazing and weren't hard on the eyes or overly desaturated. The mood was amazing and the visual effects were done so incredibly well and actually look very professional. I especially loved the feedback when you push the buttons all the way to the right of the map.
The sound was also done amazingly well. The music is absolute perfection and contributes to the mood in such a positive manner. I could listen to the menu music alone for hours. It gives me chills with how good it is. The sound effects are satisfying and really make the character feel like a part of the world.
As for the story, I was very engaged the whole time with every aspect, despite just being a delivery. Seriously, you did well making that enjoyable and engaging. I loved the aspect of the other side, the human appearing around, and that you could find various human objects throughout the areas. And you set up all those mysteries beyond well! What's in the package? Who's the girl? Who's that taking the package? I'm dying to know the answers and you did awesome at giving them to us not all at once and making them believable for the world at the same time.
Now on to what I hope will be good feedback to make this a better game for the full version!
One thing I might say is to find a way to incorporate the text you see at the beginning and end of the demo into the gameplay or dialogue itself. I believe this would help with engaging players. Another thing I think would make the world feel more alive would be to make the music more intense for more intense sequences. An example would be when the Observer panics when you say you left the package behind. I think it would be cool if there was a little theme that played whenever the girl was on screen, too.
I encountered two bugs, one I got when I rode over to the Terminal. The screen faded to black and stayed that way. The other time, I was entering the Science Workshop and I was unable to use any controls in the game. The controls, menu, none of them worked. Both of these only happened once, though.
Of course, all the feedback is 100% my own and might not reflect your own desires for the game. These things, in my opinion would make the experience better, but the absence of them doesn't make it worse. Sorry I've written so much! I just had a lot to say. This demo is the coolest demo I've played in a while and I can think of no games that have intrigued me as much as this one has right from the start!
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love the game. smooth gameplay and great graphics. keep up the good work.
Best indie game I ever played. Pretty cool graphics and storytelling, and almost no language mistakes btw
Somehow, my player always keep running to the left when no controls is pressed, Might be a bug. The game is great, well made, specially the graphic. Very stylish and blend perfectly with the story and the mood. Great work!
hola me sale que tengo los fps por debajo de treinta y no me deja juga
visually stunning
A beautifully presented game! after 45 minutes I was engrossed. It just goes to prove that no violence is required to make a game captivating. I look forward to seeing more of this!
The graphics are so good..
Such an awesome game so far. Love the art style and can't wait to see the story unfold.
Looking forward to the full game.
I wonder about the body at the end...why was it empty? OOoooh.
I feel it's rather sparse on challenge - is it meant to be more like a visual novel?
art style and color palette is amazing. well done.
this game sick, well made
Heyyyooohhh
Ein Spiel in der die Menschen verschwunden sind und es nur noch Roboter gibt? Wie könnte ich das abschlagen. Hat mir viel Spaß gemacht und da die deutsche Sprache noch nicht unterstütz wird habe ich es übersetzt. Ich würde mich sehr freuen, wenn ihr euch mein Video anschaut.
I turned down the music but during the play it automatically increased
I am not gonna lie when I saw this I thought of Call Of Duty: Black Ops 3 and Detroit: Become Human. This is supposed to be a compliment, both of those games are great.
I actually love Detroit: Become Human very much, such an amazing game!
That's sooo pretty omg... You're a freaking legend Ryan.
how enter on the door?
This was an amazing game
Nice Work
Sorry, I can't share it to my friends, because i don't have any :'(
That's sad dude
It's ok, I don't need friends with this beautiful game!
Amazing
just finished it and it was sooooooooooo goooood
Really enjoyed playing through the Demo. Loved the style and music and looking forward to where the game goes next.
im so excited to see what happens next
Nice one ! Looks very promising :) One day, i hope to make something this good !
Looks like a promising game! Love the graphics and 3D/2D shaded modules. What was used for the graphics?
Thanks, I used Blender for the models and 2D renderer pipeline in Unity.
Did you create the background graphics yourself? I love the coloring and how the 3D Models blend in with the 2D
Yes, the buildings in the background was created in 3D as well as the characters and foreground buildings/trees/small item.
This game is awesome!
Thanks :D
Awesome Game !!
this is a really impressive little demo!! the music and art are both incredible :)
i did encounter some bugs though, especially with stairs- i just fell through them a few times, including one time in the ending area that trapped me beneath them, so i had to restart from my save point.
all things considered though this is a very strong start! i'm excited to see what happens next to my favourite tiny delivery robot :>
Wooow! :) Ryan what kind of engine do you used?
This game is made with Unity :D
Tks! :)
Is your game going to be free?
I'm afraid not :)
OK
What gorgeous game ! I had a very good time playing the demo !
Some problem I encountered : At some point I jumped and fell through the ground and died, when I took the transportation it made me die.
Also I don't realy get why the final robot is an empty shell, we just gave him a new battery ?
Anyway I really want to know more about this world and it's story can't wait for a full release !
Thank you for your helpful feedback :D
Super cool game!
Too bad I can't play it, since I'm on linux...
(maybe port plz?)
did you try wine?
I did
It works, but it's very slow and with tons of input delay
Good game is the full release going to be name your own price
it is a very nice game!
little bug: when you are in jump state and see girl you will be freeze, but other robots will move
I really enjoyed this! The art is amazing and the characters were all likeable and fun. A few little English things (e.g. in the opening text) but I'm sure you can get the writing edited before the full release. I'm assuming this is because it's still in progress but I believe there's a continuity error at the end of the demo: The robot guard should not be an empty shell because it was established earlier that they had a functioning battery. We shouldn't be able to drop into their body (unless this is part of the story and the guard was the one who stole our original body?). Anyway I can't wait for the full game!
This game is great! Looking forward for the full version!
It looks interesting. Banner is great :)
The game is really nice but I found some problems:first,I cant jump over that pink box to reach the other part of the area(I pushed it to its place but i still couldnt).Second,when you change screens It might happen that you cant move anymore.Third,the jump height is like you would be hit by an invisible wall,I just literally pushes you onto the ground as soon as you jump.The last problem is that its that the game Is laggy(but maybe just cuz my laptop is bad).But since its a demo i wont say it is bad,I see a lot of potential in it,but it really has some problems to deal with.Good luck.
This is the most amazing game I've played in a while, let alone the fact that it's a demo!
The art is absolutely gorgeous and I love the technique mentioned above. The colors were amazing and weren't hard on the eyes or overly desaturated. The mood was amazing and the visual effects were done so incredibly well and actually look very professional. I especially loved the feedback when you push the buttons all the way to the right of the map.
The sound was also done amazingly well. The music is absolute perfection and contributes to the mood in such a positive manner. I could listen to the menu music alone for hours. It gives me chills with how good it is. The sound effects are satisfying and really make the character feel like a part of the world.
As for the story, I was very engaged the whole time with every aspect, despite just being a delivery. Seriously, you did well making that enjoyable and engaging. I loved the aspect of the other side, the human appearing around, and that you could find various human objects throughout the areas. And you set up all those mysteries beyond well! What's in the package? Who's the girl? Who's that taking the package? I'm dying to know the answers and you did awesome at giving them to us not all at once and making them believable for the world at the same time.
Now on to what I hope will be good feedback to make this a better game for the full version!
One thing I might say is to find a way to incorporate the text you see at the beginning and end of the demo into the gameplay or dialogue itself. I believe this would help with engaging players. Another thing I think would make the world feel more alive would be to make the music more intense for more intense sequences. An example would be when the Observer panics when you say you left the package behind. I think it would be cool if there was a little theme that played whenever the girl was on screen, too.
I encountered two bugs, one I got when I rode over to the Terminal. The screen faded to black and stayed that way. The other time, I was entering the Science Workshop and I was unable to use any controls in the game. The controls, menu, none of them worked. Both of these only happened once, though.
Of course, all the feedback is 100% my own and might not reflect your own desires for the game. These things, in my opinion would make the experience better, but the absence of them doesn't make it worse. Sorry I've written so much! I just had a lot to say. This demo is the coolest demo I've played in a while and I can think of no games that have intrigued me as much as this one has right from the start!
Thank you for your kind comment and bug report :D I'll look into these bugs :D